Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Love all!

I watched two pigeons
As they courted and flirted

They looked, they teased
They played in the breeze

They circled each other, and actually 'necked'
Then things got serious and they began to 'peck'

My heart filled with laughter
That rushed out to be heard

As i prayed there was no Muthalik
In the simple world of birds

9 comments:

Ganges said...

Lovely, Arch! That was a refreshing poem and a refreshing thought :)

Roopa said...

With men as mad as Muthalik
And crazed and stupid and sick
Never a pigeon or a dove
Can live in peace or love

I know my rhyme sucks, but your versification is beautiful :)

Wanderlust said...

I agree.. very fresh!

K said...

hey...they had to fly all the way to your apartment to make out. may be there are running away from their muthalik!

am a jerk....nice one ;) )

Arch said...

Thank you for making my day :) :)

Anonymous said...

Too good!

Arch said...

Thanks Shail!

Anonymous said...

Arch, This one was incredible. This is so good it must be sent across to some Magazine - may I take the privilege and send it to a friend over at a Mag and see how it goes?

Arch said...

wow sundar, sure! totally thrilled you thought it was that good :)